i was in your garden.

July 24, 2011

I was in your garden,
among the greens,
and cobblestones.
We agreed to meet here,
but I was there alone.

I waited in your garden,
beneath the blues,
and rising sun.
We never did meet there,
you’d already woken up.

 

It is good to be alone in a garden at dawn or dark so that all its shy presences may haunt you and possess you in a reverie of suspended thought.  – James Douglas, Down Shoe Lane

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13 Responses to “i was in your garden.”

  1. booguloo said

    Sharing each other’s dreams together, while sleeping at the same time is a dream and only works on the third Tuesday of any given month with a full moon that day. Now if you knew how to Vulcan mind meld then that would be a different story… lol

  2. I enjoyed reading this piece very much. 🙂

  3. Beautiful poem. A striking thought about dreams and if they are shared.

  4. luna15 said

    very pretty and haunting in a way write.

  5. hmmm meditative piece, peaceful, nice! 🙂
    enjoy the potluck!!!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/07/20/emu/

  6. Jingle said

    fancy thoughts, well penned.
    if it comes true, it is super cool.
    🙂

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