run, rabbit, run.

July 26, 2011

Run, rabbit, run.
GO, GO, GO.
Bob and weave,
dig and furrow.
GIT, GIT, GIT.
Turn tail and go,
beneath the briars,
betwixt the burrows.
Run, rabbit, run.
SHOO, SHOO, SHOO.
Love is coming,
and it’s after you.

Now, here, you see, it takes all the running you can do, to keep in the same place. If you want to get somewhere else, you must run at least twice as fast as that. – Red Queen, Through the Looking Glass

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14 Responses to “run, rabbit, run.”

  1. Danny Nettleton said

    Really liked this. The idea of love being the predator. Good rhythm, too.

  2. Mr.memo said

    hahahahahah, very nice one cant stop laughing, reminds me of my small sister when she sings……

  3. Do ANYTHING to me, just don’t throw me in that briar patch!

    • Fountains said

      Brer Rabbit was one of my absolute favorite characters as a child, and still may be! Glad you made the connection. 😉

      • Love how your rolled Brer Rabbit, Alice in Wonderland, and The Runaway Bunny all into one poem–brings back lots of wonderful memories, though I figured that wasn’t quite your intention. Even if it wasn’t you still get credit for it 🙂

  4. j said

    Made me laugh and smile. I liked what Danny said as well…love being predator. Nice analogy there.

  5. hobgoblin2011 said

    Nice job, lots of rhythm and flow. It’s a fun read

  6. love it,

    love is after you, run for fun?

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